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November 18, 2012
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Canon EOS REBEL T3i
1/32 second
F/3.5
18 mm
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Sep 26, 2012, 3:04:45 PM
EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS II
QuickTime 7.6.6
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Critique by ~forgetyourwoes Nov 18, 2012, 10:08:25 PM
A lovely photo excersizing good use of blur and perspective. I, personally, would have played a little bit more with lighting. I know it's hard to control how lighting is in a grocery store, but you could have played around with your personal positioning to make a good thing better.

I would have also played with the shot a bit. I feel like this is too tight of a camera angle. Don't be afraid to loosen up a bit. This is a good extreme one point perspective, but like I said; this is too tight for my liking.

Otherwise, keep up the good work on your photography. I hope to see more from you.
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Critique by !CoR74N4 Nov 18, 2012, 8:44:22 PM
This is funny, but not really "art" I guess you could say. However, the ambience of the light on the shadows of the twinky is completely artistic. It should be held in art museums all across the world. Easily Daily Deviation. The vision is incredible. It screams, " MASTERPIECE" And the camera focuses perfectly on the subject. This is very original. I think the company should hand over the company to you. The technique..the way you capture the twinky boxes all standing together next to the doughnuts, just like twins. The impact left me shattered and completely heartbroken. This will inspire me for ages
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~qwertydood1 Nov 18, 2012
;_;7 never forget...
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